Sunday, August 13, 2006

"Dialog's easy," he expounded. "It's just people talking!"

Dialog seems like it should be the easiest part of fiction writing. After all, people talk all the time. We're constantly immersed in the speech of other human beings. Duplicating it should be a straight-forward process.

Sadly, the contrary is true. Good dialog takes a tremendous amount of work, and doesn't bear as much resemblence to the way people actually talk as you might think. Here are some things that I've learned about writing dialog. By no means do I claim to have mastered any of these, but they're mostly points I have on my editing list to keep track of as I'm working.

  • Avoid embelished dialog attribution -- As a new writer, it often feels awkward to continually write "he said" or "she said" throughout the dialog. There are so many great synonyms to liven up those little tags with! Quash this urge. Those fancy words you try to slip in instead of "said" (or occasionally "asked") often detract from the flow, and don't give it nearly the boost you think you're adding.
  • Avoid unnecessary dialog attribution -- This goes hand and glove with the first point. If it's clear without attribution who is speaking, drop it all together. This has been recently pointed out in my own work. I'd heard it before, but taking a good hard look at it, I see I've slipped too many of those in. Especially in scenes where two people are talking, must of the dialog should carry itself, without much modification.
  • Do include action -- It is entirely appropriate, in fact desirable, to mix up your dialog with characters doing things. This is a great way to clarify attribution (if necessary), convey extra information about how the characters are responding to the dialog and move forward the action in a scene. I avoid doing this in each block of dialog, but every couple paragraphs it will often keep things moving along.
  • Tighten, tighten, tighten -- Unless you have a character who specifically talks in a more formal manner, your dialog should be tighter than actual speech. When people talk, there are tons of pauses, unnecessary phrases, hmms and haws, stuff that gets really boring to read. I wrote a story in college once where I had lovingly constructed all the dialog to sound incredibly accurate detail. Several classmates pointed out how well I'd done at mimicing people's speech, but the professor (rightly so) called out how much that accuracy dragged down the pacing. When in doubt, keep dialog short and punchy.
  • Name usage -- Another recent find in my writing was the use of first names between characters. I often skirted past overdoing the attribution by having the characters refer to each other by name, "Kyle, we should....", "Doesn't that seem dangerous Emily?" Don't do what I do! Once it was pointed out, I started paying attention to my own speech. It is quite rare that I'll actually use someone's name in conversation, except possibly in a greeting.
So there it is, my current recap of my own dialog's rehabilitation!

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